by Lori Arnold
(Salt Lake City, Utah USA)
This is a sunset taken over the Great Salt Lake.
For some reason, it is missing the spark that capture people's eye in my opinion.
I like it, just want to know how I could make it better!
Lori, this is a lovely sunset!
There are many elements here that make this a good photo.
First, there is the run of rocks in the foreground, heading out to sea. This adds some foreground interest.
Then there is the sky itself – some cloud (which is good), and some nice colours from blues to reds.
But if we were to make this a perfect photo . . . well, there are a couple of things to try.
First of all, the framing. There is a mountain to the left on the horizon. But is gets a little chopped off. Better framing of the photo would have brought it into the scene.
I would suggest moving the camera to the left a touch so that the tip of the mountain meets the sea about two thirds of the way in.
I also think there is just a little too much of the dark foreground at the very bottom of the photo. My second suggestion would be to have moved the camera up a little, to include more of the sky, and less of the darkness at the bottom.
My third suggestion would be to have taken a panorama. This could have been achieved by taking three or four overlapping images, and then 'stitching' them together using software.
The reason why a panorama lifts this type of photo is because it is a more natural way for humans to look at a scene. Think about it – when you go to a scenic spot like this, I bet your eyes go left to right, not up and down.
Finally, there’s the post-processing. Don’t be afraid to use software to add a little 'punch' to a photo like this (professionals do, so why shouldn’t you?). I would recommend boosting the contrast first, then possibly the saturation too.
Don’t go too far with these adjustments though. The aim is to enhance, not completely alter the image.
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